The art work being all hand drawn and the fork-in-the-road story where we decide a young princes fate really does add a weight to the game itself. All of it was beautifully done and I’m just in awe <3 <3
This is so beautiful! The art is lovely and the story feels well developed for the length. In an ideal world the things of note on the games page would be baked into the story but honestly I don't mind the exposition that much for the sake of the story to be told. And sometimes you do just need to explain the odd sensibilities of the Omegaverse.
Notes for improvement would be that sometimes it felt like the music varied in volume, one track would be good but the next would be quieter. Some of the transitions involving character sprites felt a bit abrupt, so seeing the dissolve or move transition/command might help in the future. I'm new to programming in Ren'py so hopefully this is actually helpful advice!
An amazing debut game, honestly. Had much fun playing!
Thank you so much for the feedback! It's very very helpful for a first time developer like me!! :-) Given the short time for the Jam and the fact I was learning all of this for the first time and built everything solo I totally understand the parts that were lacking! And I do plan on fiddling with it more as I learn better coding techniques :-) I'm so so glad you had fun playing!! And I hope you stick around for more Games and stories I have to tell and make!
Certainly! I'm glad the feedback's helpful. I made my first visual novel for this jam as well but I definitely feel like your game's better but maybe that's just my bias!
Aw, thank you! I've been trying to play as many as possible of the jam games. Such creative and varied work, it's exciting every time I see another submission has been added!
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I wonder if it will be in Android.Right?
i surprised how well this game is made an i surprising it is an how well turned out to An The Art Looks
Striking!
The art work being all hand drawn and the fork-in-the-road story where we decide a young princes fate really does add a weight to the game itself.
All of it was beautifully done and I’m just in awe <3 <3
This is so beautiful! The art is lovely and the story feels well developed for the length. In an ideal world the things of note on the games page would be baked into the story but honestly I don't mind the exposition that much for the sake of the story to be told. And sometimes you do just need to explain the odd sensibilities of the Omegaverse.
Notes for improvement would be that sometimes it felt like the music varied in volume, one track would be good but the next would be quieter. Some of the transitions involving character sprites felt a bit abrupt, so seeing the dissolve or move transition/command might help in the future. I'm new to programming in Ren'py so hopefully this is actually helpful advice!
An amazing debut game, honestly. Had much fun playing!
Thank you so much for the feedback! It's very very helpful for a first time developer like me!! :-) Given the short time for the Jam and the fact I was learning all of this for the first time and built everything solo I totally understand the parts that were lacking! And I do plan on fiddling with it more as I learn better coding techniques :-) I'm so so glad you had fun playing!! And I hope you stick around for more Games and stories I have to tell and make!
Certainly! I'm glad the feedback's helpful. I made my first visual novel for this jam as well but I definitely feel like your game's better but maybe that's just my bias!
Not "Better" just different! I'm working my way through all the games in the Jam so I'll make sure yours is next on my list :-)
Aw, thank you! I've been trying to play as many as possible of the jam games. Such creative and varied work, it's exciting every time I see another submission has been added!
Very beautiful and touching story <3
Thank you so much!
How long is the story?
roughly 5k words :-)